The Start of Something... New...

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Feedback welcome and encouraged!

This could continue...

Also, link only because image itself is huge. ^^;

Ya! I read this over the weekend, but for one reason or another I didn't say anything. THEN I read it yesterday and work interupted and I couldn't answer.

ANSWERING!!!

It's kinda hard to read. Granted I think it would be easier if I had a hard copy, but it is what it is. It was still hard to follow, like which panel to read next and all that. I'm used to Manga and at first thats how I thought it went, but then it didn't.. I was confused. I do understand whats going on, my head finally put it all together right.

Art work is amiture but good, if a bit smudgy but thats what happens to pencil.. oh evil pencils... I can't draw a life like person to save my soul, objects I can do, but people... *shivers *

The story is intriguing I'll read it

It is a bit of a mock-up still, but that's kinda the rough.

Yeah, the anatomy is the thing I'm working hard on to improve, but I wanna keep it kinda stylized like this just so it's unique.

I've already redone this page, and most of the text actually will get typed-in rather then just written in. For finishin' things up though, I have a tablet and will do coloring on the computer too.

Keep you in the loop about what's to happen with it.

Ya, please do! tell me how the tablet is, I want one soooo bad.